Your first piece is written quite casually. You should address this and ensure that you write objectively and just talk about information gathered from your research. Try not to make passing statements and assumptions about what you are researching.
You talk about analogue techniques that encompasses a lot of different factors. As such, you state that the return to analogue is a consumer driven phenomenon which, in respect to the original quote, is not true. A lot of what we see in terms of analogue techniques is done as pastime rather than professional practice. Alternatively, what they discuss in Fingerprint is the use of analogue techniques within professional practice. You should ensure that you address these differences.
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