Essay: Feedback

"Structurally and thematically this piece is really strong. I think there are more opportunities for triangulation and i think you could do with finding more sources similar to Gauntlett. Ros Gill's Gender and the media can be a good all round text book on the topic and will lead to other theories and ideas. Try to hone in on discussions about audiences and effects because these will lead to information about how media has an influence on people."

Summary

• Try to do more triangulation between the different sources.
• Read and look into Ros Gill's Gender and the Media
• Focus more on how media has an influence on people, looking further into audiences and effects.