Monday, 27 November 2017

Essay: First Draft Feedback

- Depend less on Gauntlett, find other quotes which say similar things, or paraphrase his quotes or quote the book instead.

- Look at David Gauntlett, 'Moving Experiences'.

- Gender isn't subjective it's just open to different takes and people's opinions. 

- When quoting the BBC documentary, need to quote the writer/director.

- Not so much stereotyping, but that they aren't giving alternative choices, there is limited choice, nothing in between. 

- Quote the author of the articles, or the host site. 

- In the conclusion of the essay, write about perceptions, Gauntlett says that media doesn't inform behaviour, but it informs perceptions. Perceptions is a key word. 

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