Practical: Mock Up 01

• Design is too busy and repetitive.
• Needs more white space.
• More even layout of illustrations.

• Too much white space.
• The front of the packaging needs to be the most informative, eye catching and engaging.
• Different typeface to be experimented with. 

• Layout was not right, needs to be placed the right way around.
• Reduce the amount of text.
• Too much white space around the edges of the designs.
• Need to think about proportions. 

• Final adverts.
• Using vector illustrations.
• Bright vibrant and contrasting colours.
• Large geometric shapes